Please let me know my mistakes in following essay( English writing)?

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Question by : Please let me know my mistakes in following essay( English writing)?
Hi dear friend
I will be so thankful if you help me knowing my mistakes in following essay.
If it does have cohesion and coherence ?
I think I have repeated public transportation too much, what other word you suggest
Actually I have an ielts exam and it is realy important for me to improve my writing skill



Many people have tendency to use their own personal cars instead of public

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